Bleeding Rose

Absolutely beautiful. I cam up with my own tune to sing along with it though. I hope that is okay! :D I will prolly be singing this for a while ...

Wow. That was very deep written. Very beautiful but so ugly. I loved the feeling that flew through me as I read the words. I thought that this was amazing. ...

This was adorable, but one issue that bothered me. If Patrick is in kindergarten then why is he speaking so...biggly :lol: This must be one smart kid. Have you ever ...

Please my love, I beg you to step into the light and let the radiation and brightness fill you with the warmth of its rays. *sniffs* This is so beautiful! ...

That's the beauty of love. This is art in the making of something golden and beautiful. I loved this line. This was really the only line that I seriously payed ...

I don't like was weird and I couldn't tell who you were aiming this song to until the end. Some people can take this to offense because you use both ...

was...okay. It didn't relate to the title at all. This is more of a seasonal love song. It made very much since to me and I understood it in my ...

This was a nice poem. It was cute and serious at the same time. I liked the way you worded it. Very creative and...beautiful. My favorite part was... I did ...

I liked this very much. I liked it because it is something that is happening in modern time. All of the stars are staring to dissappear and I liked how ...

Hello! Okay, first off, I absolutely adored this poem! It was great and descriptive and romantic...definitely my type of poem. guitargrl1323 was correct. Waste should be waist. Also, you need ...

on my bicycle, I transcend categories! T ell me, officer, A m I slow pedestrian, meandering through life, or A m I noisy automobile, fogging up the air? A nd, ...

In a world left forgotten beyond murky depths of silent shores. I cry the mist of the rainbow. I thought that this was a very beautiful quote. It was deep ...

Girl: How could you do this to me............I thought you two loved me? Dad: I do, we do its just not working out between us. Girl: But still what's not ...

Wow. I thought that this was a very good peice and it sums up every guys feelings of a girl when he watches her fall and someone catches her before ...

I thought that this was very cute! (But you know me. I think that everything is cute!) My favorite part was this: But the naked --leafless-- trees cracked around the ...